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PostSubject: Hollow (work in progress)   Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:55 pm

Name: Thalassa Ydra Kodika
Nickname: Thálassa
(Ex for rogues)Fraccion to espada:
Race: Rogue Hollow
Eye color: Orange/Red
Hair color:Green/Orange
Height: 5'11"
Weight: Unknown
Gender: Male
Personality: Easy going
Medical problems: None
Base of operations: Under water cave in Karakura Town river.
Appearance:
Zan:
Combat Style Description:Uses his sword and Speed to fight. In Ress from he uses his many tail creatures to fight long/Mid distance.

Combat Strengths:
Swordsmanship (5)
Speed (5)
Strength (3)
Endurance(3)
Cero Expert (4)

Combat Weakness:
Quick temper(3)
Madness(5)
Acrobatic(5)
Team wrok(5)
Hand to Hand Combat(2)

Mask Removal: Water leaks from his body. Gains control over about 5,000 Gallons of water.
Mask remains location: Face
Hollow hole location: Left shoulder (Covered as you can see)
Resurrection Name:
Resurrection Description:Loses most power over his water. Only the can use the water to push his body at high speeds. His outfit changes color and he grows 9 snake like creatures from his lower back. Each 9 feet long. Each head can fire a Cero. 3 heads can combine their Cero to make a Stronger Cero. 6 Combine to become Make a Bigger and more Powerful Cero. 9!! makes my most powerful cero is stronger if not equal to Kido #88. Each head can be cut off. The when the head dies by cut off or being destroyed by a great force but grows back in 5 post. Each head also has a Unique ability. Reuse time on Abilities may very.(#=Post count)
1: Fire a Cero equal to the power of 6 heads(8 )
2: Shoots a red ring if it hits if has the effect of Kido#61(5)
3:If this head bites you it grains you energy.(Last as long as its biting you)
4:Creates a Shield Equal to Kido#81(7)
5: Can heal a major wound(9)
6:Can detach and blow up(1)
7: Can eat Spiritual energy Cero/Kido/Zan Attack. (6)
8:Fires a Cero equal in power to the eaten attack by head #7 (6)
9:Can Fire a Cero equal to all 9 heads (16)


Bio
A boy who drowned in the Karakura Town River.
This Hollow was good friends with a soul Reaper named Dami Moeru before his death. He often seen carrying Dami's sword.

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:28 pm

5,000 gallons of water? u DO realize how MUCH water that is right?

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:51 pm

Really not that much when you think about it
http://www.poolandspa.com/page366.htm
5,000 is about as much as a Small pool
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:33 pm

maybe im tripping but is there supposto be a square in ur name? o_O

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:34 pm

Your tripping hard
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:42 pm

Thálassa Ýdra Kó̱dika

the bolded part o_O

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:56 pm

I see a contradiction in ur weaknesses. o_O

It says you dont think when fightign then theres one where u dnot try to kill o_O understand?

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:18 am

I think ur ress is a tad to much o_O

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:19 am

Tell me how
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:26 am

1: Fire a Cero equal to the power of 6 heads(7)
2: Shoots a red ring if it hits if has the effect of Kido#61(5)
3:If this head bites you it grains you energy.(Last as long as its biting you)
4:Creates a Shield Equal to Kido#81(6)
5: Can heal a major wound(9)
6:Can detach and blow up(1)
7: Can eat Spiritual energy Cero/Kido/Zan Attack (7 )
8:If bitten causes the area of becomes numb and limp(7)
9:Can Fire a Cero equal to all 9 heads (16)

I bolded them.
What is the number in the ( ) mean?
How powerful is the cero of the heads?

I can accept ur #3 but how strong is this head? how far can it bites?
#4. considering u have no strength in cero or spirit energy I dont see how you would be able to manage that o_O
#5. So if i chop off your limbs u can heal? do your head things heal?
#7. Whats the extent of the power it can "eat" what does the eating do? Does it have side effects?
#8. Are their teeth posiened or something? how does this work? I think this is to powerful for simply a ress.

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:49 am


What is the number in the ( ) mean? = Reuse time in post
How powerful is the cero of the heads? = A cero from 1 Would= A Cero basic

I can accept ur #3 but how strong is this head? how far can it bites? = Each head is 9 feet long
#4. considering u have no strength in cero or spirit energy I dont see how you would be able to manage that o_O =.... i dont under stand
#5. So if i chop off your limbs u can heal? do your head things heal? = No all heads must wait 5 post before regrowing
#7. Whats the extent of the power it can "eat" what does the eating do? Does it have side effects? =Effect with 8 if 8 is gone cant be done
#8. Are their teeth posiened or something? how does this work? I think this is to powerful for simply a ress. = Re done
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:34 am

for all of the numbrs u have only answered 1 of the questions i have stated.

#4 means since your charcter has no strengths or weaknesses in kido I dont really see how you would be able to create a barrier that strong.

Some of the questions are incorrectly answered.
#3 and 7 from what I see currently

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Fri Aug 05, 2011 12:31 pm

#4 would only depend on my strengths in Cero not kido
#3 but how strong is this head? how far can it bites? = Each head is 9 feet long.
The head is just as strong as the other heads
#7 Whats the extent of the power it can "eat" what does the eating do? Does it have side effects? =
The Extent of the power it can eat? Doesn't have 1
What does Eating do? Read Head 8 the power was changed
Side effects? No side effects but the down side is its a chain effect with head 8. So with out head 7 head 8 becomes usless and with out head 7.


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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:51 pm

Resurrection Description:Loses most power over his water. Only the can use the water to push his body at high speeds. His outfit changes color and he grows 9 snake like creatures from his lower back. Each 9 feet long. Each head can fire a Cero. 3 heads can combine their Cero to make a Stronger Cero. 6 Combine to become Make a Bigger and more Powerful Cero. 9!! make my most powerful cero than is 2x stronger that Kido #88. Each head can be cut off. The when the head dies by cut off or being destroyed by a great force but grows back in 5 post. Each head also has a Unique ability. Reuse time on Abilities may very.(#=Post count)

Read the bolded/underlined area. I have a huge problem with that for 2 reasons. 1:ur no good in Cero. 2: we dont know the full extent of hado 88 due to the fact that it was blocked the current only known practioner.

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Fri Aug 05, 2011 8:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:41 am

3 more things.
1:How come the 9th head is able to fire a cero equal to all 9 heads?That kills the concept of the heads having to combine to use its full power. Also why can it be used 18 times when head 1 can only use lvl 6 cero 8 times. The bigger the attack the more energy usually.
2:Same thing as number 9 just except for head 1.
3: For head 3 how much energy would it take per second? does it drain slowly or extremely fast?

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:16 am

Im not sure understand the Number in the () so just in case let mee say it again. The number in the () means how many post i have to wait before doing it again.

Head 3 grains energy very quickly
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 1:30 pm

ooooo ok then never mind then for the usage but it still defeats the concept that you wrote of them combining their ceros to make uber attacks.

is there a limit to how much energy it can drain? does the energy go to u?

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 3:46 pm

The head will suck your energy and give it to me. It will take your Energy till im at full power
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 4:11 pm

How can the opponent(s) remove the head from themselfs? will it blow off from a hado 1? How durable are the heads?

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 4:57 pm

Hado 1? No lol. The heads will die if they take direct hit from Kido of cut the head off
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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 5:42 pm

Well i give u 1/2 approvals. enjoy getting ichi xD

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PostSubject: Re: Hollow (work in progress)   Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:35 pm

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